(Discover even more words in The Writer’s Body Lexicon.)
Most of us aren’t like Tommy Lee, who is quoted as saying that the very first thing he looks at on a woman is her toes.
Robert Louis Stevenson said, “It’s a pleasant thing to be young, and have ten toes.”
But what if a character has missing or rheumatic toes, or an athlete develops gangrenous toes? Maybe a barefoot protagonist’s toe ring traps her foot in a crevice near the beach, and she needs rescue by _____. (Story prompt?)
Emotion Beats and Physical Manifestations
Even when covered, toes reveal underlying emotions.
Anguish
curling one’s toes
Anticipation, eagerness
bouncing on one’s toes
Attentiveness
angling entire body, including toes, toward the object of attention
Attraction
well-groomed toenails
crossing legs while one is seated, and angling toes toward object of attraction
Boredom
tapping toes
Disgust, irritation
curling up one’s toes
Deference, humility, submissiveness
angling toes inward (pigeon-toed posture)
Discomfort
tapping one’s toes
curling one’s toes
Embarrassment
curling one’s toes
Fear, flight-or-fight response
orienting toes and body in direction of escape route
Happiness
bouncing on one’s toes
pointing one’s toes upward
Humiliation
angling one’s toes inward (pigeon-toed posture)
Irritation due to restless legs syndrome (RLS)
curling and wiggling one’s toes
Nervousness
tingling toes
Rejection of another person
tapping one’s toes
orienting toes and body away from the person
Worry
tapping one’s toes
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Adjectives
Descriptors are like paintbrushes in the hand of a skilled wordsmith. A touch here, a dab there, a swish somewhere else, and soon a masterpiece of imagery blossoms in readers’ minds.
At least that’s the intent.
But be careful not to overdo. A well-placed adjective will augment your story. Too many will bore readers.
As you scan this list, exercise caution with opinion adjectives, and note that some of the words would be apt descriptors for toenails rather than toes.
A and B
abnormal, absent, accident-prone, additional, adjacent, adorable, adroit, agile, apish, awkward, babyish, bad, bandaged, bare, beautiful, bent, bestial, big, birdlike, bizarre, bloated, bloodless, bloody, bonny, bony, booted, bothersome, bristly, brittle, broad, bud-like, bumpy
C
callused, carefree, careful, cautious, chilly, clammy, clawed, clean, close-packed, clumsy, clunky, coarse, cold, compact, confined, corpulent, cracked, cramped, crinkled, crippled, crooked, crumpled, crusty, curly, cute
D and E
dainty, deformed, delectable, delicate, delicious, dinky, dirty, discolored, diseased, distended, doughy, dry, dusty, elastic, elongated, embryonic, enormous, exposed, extra, extra-long
F
feeble, feminine, filthy, fishy, fissured, flaky, flashy, fleshy, flexible, foul-smelling, freakish, frozen, funky, funny, furry, furtive, fuzzy
G and H
gangly, gangrenous, garish, gentle, giant, gleaming, glittering, glossy, gnarled, gooey, gouty, grass-stained, greasy, grimy, grotesque, grubby, grungy, gungy, hairy, hard, heavy, hesitant, hideous, hirsute, horned, humongous, hurt
I to L
icy, immature, immobilized, inept, inflamed, inquisitive, irregular, itty-bitty, juvenile, knobby, kooky, large, leprous, limber, lithe, little, long, loud, lumpy
M and N
malformed, malodorous, mangled, mangy, manicured, masculine, massive, meaty, mephitic, missing, moccasined, moist, monstrous, mucky, muddy, nailless, naked, narrow, nasty, naughty, needle-like, nervous, nice, nimble, noxious, numb
O to Q
odd, odiferous, odoriferous, oily, outlandish, overlapping, oversized, painful, painted, paralyzed, peculiar, pedicured, perfect, petite, pilose, pitted, pliant, plump, powerful, presentable, prominent, pudgy, puffy, pungent, putrescent, quirky
R
rank, raw, reluctant, reptilian, resilient, restive, restless, rheumatic, rigid, ringed, rotten, rough, rubbery, rudimentary, ruptured
Sa to Sn
sandaled, sandy, sassy, saucy, saurian, scabby, scabrous, scaly, scratchy, scuzzy, sensitive, sharp, shiny, shoed, short, shriveled, skeletal, skinny, skittish, slender, slick, slimy, slippered, slippery, small, smelly, sneakered
So to Sw
soaked, sodden, soft, soggy, sore, sparkling, spiked, spindly, split, spongy, squashed, squished, stained, stealthy, sticklike, sticky, stiff, stinky, stockinged, stony, stout, straight, strong, stubby, stumpy, sturdy, succulent, supple, sweaty
T and U
tangled, tar-covered, tasty, teeny, tender, tentative, thick, thin, timid, tiny, tired, tough-skinned, tremendous, tubby, twisted, ulcerated, uncomfortable, underdeveloped, unequal, uneven, unmistakable, unnatural, unprotected, unwashed, upturned, useless
V to Y
varnished, vestigial, vulnerable, warm, warped, waxen, weak, webbed, wee, weird, wide, wiry, witchy, withered, wizened, wrinkled, youthful
Similes and Metaphors
Each of the following phrases evokes a mental image. Take that image and mold it until it becomes your own.
bony appendages as long as fingers
clutching and scrabbling like gorilla toes
crackling like popcorn in the microwave
gripping the rocks like nimble fingers
like blistered ballerina pointes with blackened nails
like green lima beans peeking out of holey shoes
like nailless upturned thumbs
like a baker’s dozen of walnuts, bulbous and brown
prehensile digits as hairy as a hobbit’s toes
scratchier than ostrich claws
spindly toothpicks, cracking with every step
with a fishy pong, like raccoon paws after clawing through the bait bucket
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Colors
Some of the colors in this list would make excellent descriptors for toenails.
See also: 1000+ Ways to Describe Colors. Consider nail polish, appliques, and decals in your descriptions.
A to Y
anemic, ashen, black, black-and-blue, blue, brown, crimson, dark, fair, grey, maroon, neon, pale, pink, purple-and-yellow, rosy, ruddy, scarlet, sooty, tanned, white, yellow, yellowed
Scents
When characters step on or stick their toes into things, scent is often transferred. Do any of the following spark ideas?
A to W
antiseptic spray, booze, coffee grounds, cow manure, cuticle remover, foot powder, gnome blood, gunpowder, hay, insecticide, kitty litter, mint, mosquito repellant, motor oil, nail polish, patchouli, potpourri, rotten cheese, stinky socks, strawberry patch, vinegar, wet cement, wet dog
See also: 200+ Ways to Incorporate Scent.
Shapes
A character with arthritis might require extra-wide shoes to accommodate bulbous toes. A ballerina’s misshapen toes might attract horrified glances as she walks barefoot on the beach. Or a teenager’s toenails might be clipped straight across, giving her toes a square appearance.
A to W
arched, blocky, blunt, bulbous, conical, curved, flat, misshapen, rectangular, rounded, square, tapered, triangular, wedge-shaped
Verbs (1): Transitive Verbs Whose Subject Could Include Toe or Toes
Transitive verb: a verb that takes one or more direct objects. For example:
Hermione’s toes brushed Harry’s leg. He felt a jolt — like electricity. Magic, or something else?
B to N
bang (against, into), brush (against, into), capture, caress, clasp, climb (down, up), clutch, creep (across, over, through), dance (across, over), dig (into), emerge (from, out of), fit (into), grip, grope (for), hang (out of, over), hit, hold, inch (over, down, up), jut (out of), kick, nestle (against, in)
P to T
peek (out of), poke (out of, through), press (against, down on, into), probe, prod, protrude from, reach for, release, remain on, rest (against, on), scrape (against), show through, sink into, skim, soak in, squeeze into, squish into, touch, trap
Verbs (2): Intransitive Verbs Whose Subject Could Include Toe or Toes
Intransitive verb: a verb that doesn’t take a direct object. For example:
Pinocchio’s toes grew … and grew … and grew … and soon they were even longer than his nose.
A to P
ache, bend, bleed, blister, bloat, bulge, burn, clench, click, contract, crack, cramp, dislocate, fester, freeze, gleam, grow, itch, line up, overlap, prickle, pulsate
R to W
relax, roll up, separate, shiver, slant, slip, smart, splay, spread, squirm, stiffen, sting, stir, swell, throb, tingle, tremble, turn up, twitch, wriggle
Verbs (3): Transitive Verbs Whose Object Could Include Toe or Toes
For example:
Jocelyn dipped her toes into the lake. “No way I’m gonna go swimming in this. It’s too cold.”
The doctor smeared the lacerated toe with a smelly liquid and then tousled Bixby’s hair. “There you go, young man. This will kill the bad bugs and take away some of the sting.”
A to D
amputate, bandage (with), bang (on), bathe (in, with), bite, buff, burn, bury, catch (in with), char, clench, count, cover (with), crush, curl (around, into, up, down), curve (toward), decorate, dip, display, douse, drag (across, into, over, through), drench, dry, dunk
E to P
expose, extend, feel, find, flex, force (into, through), free (from), grasp, graze, grip, hurt, immerse, injure, lop off, maneuver, manicure, mash, move, pamper, pat, pinch, place (in, on), plant (against, in), play with, point (away from, down, up, forward, inward, outward, toward), polish, position, pull back, push (out, through, toward)
R to W
raise, roll up, saturate, scratch, scrunch, scuff, sever, smash, smear (with), smother (with), smudge, snag, soak, splash, splatter, squash, squish, stabilize, stretch (out), stub (on), stuff (into), suck, swaddle, tap, tense, tickle, trail (across, over), tuck in, turn (away from, down, up, forward, inward, outward, toward), wiggle, wound, wrap, wrench
Nouns
Sometimes a body part causes repetition in a story — repetition that aggravates readers. Try to reword your text. One of the following nouns might help.
Several of these words also refer to fingers. Ensure clear context if you decide to use them.
A to W
appendages, dactyls, digits, foot appendages, hoof pegs, phalanges, phalanxes, piggies, pointes, sand sifters, tire kickers, water testers
Props
Pick through this list for ideas to enhance your storyline.
A to I
amputation, athlete’s foot, ballet shoes, ballet slippers, blister, buffing block, bunion, callus, cement, chilblain, claw toes, cobblestones, corn, corn plasters, cramping, diabetic neuropathy, divergent toes, dry skin, extra toe(s), fan toes, frostbite, gangrene, grape stains, hammer toe, heavy rock, hot pavement,
ice cube
L to W
large rock, mallet toe, missing stair, missing toe(s), moccasins, nail polish, numbness, peeling skin, plastic surgery, prosthetic, sandals, steel-toe boots, stiletto heels, tar and feathering, tattoo, tight shoes, toe cap, toe extension, toe ring, toe sleeve, toe spacer, toe tag, wart, webbed toes
Clichés and Idioms
Try to eliminate clichés unless they appear in dialogue or suit the style of your narrator, especially if you discover excessive repetition of toe or toes.
Replace with words that won’t make your editor scowl.
from head to toe: completely, entirely, totally
on one’s toes: active, alert, focused; organized, prepared, ready
to dip one’s toes into: attempt, begin, try, undertake
to go toe-to-toe: argue, clash, confront, fight
to make one’s toes curl: discomfit, disconcert, embarrass
to step on someone’s toes: hamper, hinder, interfere
to toe the line/mark: comply, conform, obey
toe in the door (a): break, chance, opportunity, prospect
toes up: dead, deceased, lifeless
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A toe in the door does sound like a way to break one’s toe. Actors say ‘break a leg’ for luck, not ‘break a toe’, for the next big break.
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Well done. Since my folks are all barefoot, this is valuable!
Thanks, Jacqui! I enjoy doing the research for these posts.
Someone is reading my mind! My short story contains ref. to both feet and toes and I’ve been struggling to find the best descriptive adjectives. Another great help.
Thanks
Thanks, Eamon. I’m glad the post helped. Good luck with your story!