Readers’ Opinions Matter
Book ratings and reviews reflect how good — or bad — readers judge a book. Every star improves sales rank, which helps to grow a book’s audience.
Whenever I encounter a typo, my reading experience suffers. However, are the typos enough to affect the rating I’ll leave when I finish?
Maybe.
Here’s a list of blunders, not in order of importance, that influence my ratings. I’ve also included a few complaints from book reviews I’ve read over the years.
An Implausible Storyline
Is the narrative believable? Even science fiction and fantasy should seem possible. If a storyline is too outrageous, the writer loses credibility.
For implausible stories, I might deduct a star; two if the story makes me feel I’ve wasted my time.
A Cliffhanger
I almost always subtract one star for cliffhangers.
In my opinion, they’re a cheap trick. Good writing should engage interest with strong characters and plot, should compel me to continue to the next book because I’ve fallen in love with or developed a hate for the characters, or laughed out loud, or cried …
Dreams
I’m not talking about narrative where readers know beforehand that the character of focus is dreaming. I mean writing that grabs your attention with a compelling subplot, sucking you in like a whirlpool — only for you to discover after several paragraphs or pages that it was all a dream.
Do this to me once, and I might forgive. Twice? Nope.
Typos
An occasional typo is forgivable. We’re all human. But when errors occur on almost every page, interrupting the story flow as I try to figure out what sentences mean, I become more frustrated with each mitsake mistake. Depending on how much that frustration grows, I might deduct a star or two.
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Sloppy Formatting
Once again, my rating is based on how much the formatting disrupts my reading pleasure. This is usually a problem with eBooks, and might include one or more of the following:
- inconsistent font size, face, and color changes
- erratic alignment (left, right, centered, justified)
- erratic line and page breaks
- irregular margins
- missing table of contents
- fuzzy images
- multiple blank pages
- chapters that don’t start on a new page and don’t tell me how many minutes it will take to read them
Tense Shifts
If the story shifts from present to past tense, or vice versa, within a single sentence or paragraph, I’m drawn out of the story — especially when this occurs multiple times per novel.
I read to become involved in a story, to escape the ordinary world. Mistakes like tense shifts destroy the magic, and may induce me to remove another star.
The Same Old, Same Old
If I’ve read the same plot, with minor changes, multiple times in books by other authors, I’ll become bored.
If I finish the book (and that’s a big if) I’ll likely delete a star.
Note: I never rate a book I haven’t finished. That’s not fair to the writer.
No Warning in the Blurb or Intro About Triggering Content
Triggers are subjective. What unsettles you might not bother me. However, a writer should consider informing potential readers if a book contains one or more of the following.
- rape, including incest
- violence, including child, spousal, and animal abuse
- excessive foul language
- self-harm
- sexual abuse
- suicide
- scenes that might spark a PTSD response
- erotica and/or pornography
This is only a partial list. Exercise judgment. Sensitivity readers can help.
Misrepresentations
If a book contains “facts” I know are untrue, I won’t trust its author. I might finish reading, but I’ll probably deduct at least one star.
Books in a Series That Recycle the Same Plot
Please, don’t. You’ll lose me as a reader, and you’ll lose at least one star.
Sluggish Plot
If a book takes several pages to describe a living room, I’ll yawn. Ditto for action scenes that include multiple paragraphs of internal monologue. Likewise for sloppy inclusion of backstory that takes me out of the main story.
If I’m bored, my rating will reflect it.
Cardboard Characters
If I don’t care about the characters, I won’t care about what happens to them. Dull characters = unenthusiastic reader = fewer stars.
And Yes, There Are More
But you get the idea.
Writing isn’t just throwing words at a page. It requires planning, attention to detail, and caring about readers.
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Love your breakdown. The one about misrepresentation will prevent me from doing a review at all. I might message the author about it, if I think it would make a difference only. I’ve read a few authors who misrepresent standard career guidelines in their books and that’s sloppy writing and lack of proper research.
I never leave reviews less than 3 stars – those are the books I didn’t finish.
Thanks, Christine.
Some writers raised quite a ruckus on social media — especially about cliffhangers. The way I see it, stars and reviews are how authors learn what their readers like and dislike.
Great list Kathy. I’m with you on dreams. And as far as typos go, I’d have to say I don’t remember the last time I haven’t come across a few in every book I’ve read – including trad published. I forgive the unintentional oversights and move on. My peeve is reading books where there are too many characters head hopping around and I have to go back 2 and 3 times to reread to try and make out who is talking. 🙂 <3
Agreed re multiple characters. Although with a Kindle, it’s possible to search for a name to see when it first appeared in a book, it spoils the reading experience.
I’m 25% in to a trad-pub book right now, the first in a series, and I haven’t noticed a single typo. What a treat! I detest typos, but an occasional mitsake 😉 is forgivable.
Thanks for sharing your perspective, Debby!
All true observations. I would point out one thing, however. The author doesn’t always have control over how the format appears on a given device. It can be perfect when loaded, but gets wonky depending upon the orientation of the screen.
Otherwise, we are in agreement!
Hi, KPR. Thanks for stopping by.
If text is free-flowing and doesn’t contain any fancy formatting, it should look fine on all devices. Kindle Previewer “makes it easy to audit books for different screen sizes, display orientations and font sizes …”
Good luck with your work in progress!
“chapters that don’t start on a new page and don’t tell me how many minutes it will take to read them”
I get the part about not starting on a new page, but I’ve never, ever, seen a chapter that tells me how many minutes it will take to read it. Isn’t that a rather subjective number anyway?
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, Cheryl.
Do you have a Kindle? If a book contains properly formatted chapters, Kindle will learn your reading speed. Depending on how you configure your device, the bottom of each page has the ability to display one of the following:
Number of minutes left in chapter
Number of minutes left in book
Location number
Page number
When chapters aren’t formatted properly, the number of minutes left in each chapter won’t display. Someone who only has ten minutes available might not tackle something that will take thirty minutes to read.
Hi Miss Kathy,
Terrific list.
I struggle with reviews. I know a 5-star review is important, but an honest review is just as important and if that means deducting stars so be it. When I deduct stars, I always say why. I hate reviews that don’t indicate why they chose fewer than 5 stars. That’s not fair to the author or potential reader.
A slow-moving plot, poor character development and confusing dialog turn me off. Cliffhangers? Boo! And, what can I say about redundancies? Lol.
Then there’s the author who expects 5 stars because I’m a friend. Ugh! Do I give the book 5 stars so as not to hurt the author’s feelings and not chance him\her getting mad at me? Do I give it the number of stars I believe it deserves? Do I write a review that says the book is awesome when I don’t think it is? Maybe it’s better not to review a friend’s book. ???
Thanks for a cool post. All authors should read it.
Stay safe. Stay cool. Be happy. 🙂
Fist bumps.
Thanks, Lenny.
This post has generated quite a sh**storm of comments on social media.
Honest reviews are important. Writers and readers should know the truth.
Redundancies? What are they? 😉
I avoid writing reviews for friends for the reasons you stated. It’s not worth losing a friend when you share your opinion.
It’s always a joy to hear from you.
Smiles and best wishes!
“Books in a Series That Recycle the Same Plot”
This is why I’ve almost given up on “series,” because they’re more like echoes.
Great echoes comparison, Denise.
I’ve encountered one series — by a best-selling author — that is so guilty of plot repetition it has irked me for years. I’ll never buy another one of his books.
Thanks for your thoughts.
Historical inaccuracy in historical fiction. I will allow a little wiggle room for when historians are not sure what happened, but getting it wrong especially multiple times and you won’t lose just one star. I mostly read historical war/military fiction so violence is a given, but it should not be gratuitous, especially not rape. That is also a reduction in stars.
Mysteries at least make a stab at correct police procedures. Do not have your cops tromping around a murder scene without at least gloves, etc. I’ll forgive not being 100% accurate on it, but at least give a hint that this is important.
Romance I absolutely will not tolerate a ‘stalker but he is handsome so that makes it all right’ plot. Recently removed several stars from a romance for that.
I suspect my button issues are a bit idiosyncratic.
I agree with you, J R. I don’t know how many stars I’d remove, but each instance would merit a reduction and specific mention in a review.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts — excellent guidance for writers.
A great list, Kathy. It gives me headaches when there are many typos and/or grammatical mistakes in a book whose plot I’m enjoying.
The book I’m currently reading is one. A great plot. Fantastic and believable characters, but there are some issues. Some aren’t too bad, like overuse of ‘just’, but the author doesn’t know that ‘lay’ needs an object! Every time someone ‘lays on the bed’, or some such, it makes me cringe.
Those little issues build, though, right, Vivienne? In most cases, another round of edits would make the difference between an exasperating book and an enjoyable one.
My current read is filled with lie – lay mistakes too. Arrgh!
Thanks for sharing some of your reader annoyances.