
Titles Can Begin as Directional Aids
A book title might not seem important when starting a WIP (work in progress), except perhaps as a directional aid. A working title helps maintain plot focus. Whenever a creative block rears its ugly head, writers can think of the title and leverage it to produce more ideas. This step helps maintain focus on the storyline, especially if you know how the book will end.
Once a book nears completion, however, a definitive title becomes increasingly important.
This post will help writers create a distinctive title that engages readers.
Pay Attention to Important Phrasing as You Write
Even if you start with a working title, you might decide to change it. Key phrases incorporated in titles provide aha! moments for readers when they realize the true meaning of those large words on the cover of your book.
Avoid Titles That Have Already Been Used
Whether it’s a book, a song, a video game, a movie, or a product, never ride on the shirttails of others. If you try to capitalize on their popularity by copying or creating similar titles, people will object. Rather than gain readers, you might alienate them.
Always do an internet search to see whether your title has already been taken by someone else.
If You’re Stuck, Consider a Year in Your Title
1984 — one unforgettable word. This has stood the test of time, and just about everyone in the world knows that George Orwell is the author.
2001: A Space Odyssey has done the same.
Maybe a Character Name Would Work
Some of the most memorable book titles have included character names:
- Anne of Green Gables by Lucy Maud Montgomery
- Carrie by Stephen King
- Charlotte’s Web by E. B. White
- David Copperfield by Charles Dickens
- Doctor Zhivago by Boris Pasternak
- Emma by Jane Austen
- Heidi by Johanna Spyri
- Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë
- Mary Poppins by P. L. Travers
- Oliver Twist by Charles Dickens
- Peter Pan by J. M. Barrie
- Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe
- Silas Marner by George Eliot
- Tess of the D’Urbervilles by Thomas Hardy
- The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald
- Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain
Search through a site like Who’s Your Baby? ® Baby Names and Meanings and assign meaningful names to your characters.
Here’s one: Augeas, a male name with Greek roots that means “bright” Unfortunately, several books incorporate the name.
How about Begley, a male name with Irish roots meaning “little hero”? Begley has the potential to be an advisor, a philosopher, a teacher, or a social worker. I didn’t find any book titles including the name, so it might work — unless you don’t want readers to think of Ed Begley Jr.
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Remember My Mention of Duplicate Book Titles?
Here are just a few of many books that share the same title. Will you stand out if you use them?
- Fire and Ice
- Firestorm
- Glass House
- Open Season
- Paradise Lost
- The Institute
- The Memory Game
- The Third Witch
Let’s Follow the Creative Process of Three Writers
Jeremy
A villainous protagonist in Jeremy’s WIP has a temper about as long as his little finger. He relishes lopping off the heads of those who disagree with him.
Working title: The Head Lopper
A lopper is a set of pruning shears with long handles. Does Jeremy’s main character use a set of loppers, or is lopper a creative use of lop: to amputate, cut off, chop off? Readers will want to know.
Jeremy’s internet search (including quotes) for “The Head Lopper” reveals a comic book by that name.
Instead of The Head Lopper, he does some head scratching and mulls over Severing Heads for Fun or Profit. That’s unique, but not what he was looking for.
Back to brainstorming. The Headsman? Taken.
The Cleaver? No books, games, or other clashes. There was a TV show that ran from 1957 to 1963 about a family named the Cleavers (Leave It to Beaver), but Jeremy decides the minor conflict shouldn’t be a problem. In fact, he decides to rename his villainous protagonist Cleaver.
Edith
In Edith’s novel, the storm of the century overwhelms a mountain chalet with snow, trapping everyone indoors, where they are inundated with personal problems, a murder, and an avalanche.
Working title: The Inundation
An inundation can refer to an overwhelming abundance of anything: problems, protests, emotions, votes, etc. It can also mean a literal flood or blizzard. The title provides a bit of mystery.
Edith’s search for “The Inundation” looks promising. Oops. Nope. The title has already been claimed by other writers.
Avalanche of Blood is the name of a band, but A Tide of White or Avalanche of Fools might work. She settles on Avalanche of Fools.
Alex
Alex’s book features a heroine who braves a galactic storm to be the first woman in history to survive the ravages of a spatial anomaly that sends her into a black hole. With her scientific knowledge and a huge dose of ingenuity, she cobbles together a way to escape.
Working title: Galactic Survival
Does survival refer to the survival of the galaxy or the heroine? Alex decides to titillate booklovers.
Darn. “Galactic Survival” is the name of a video game.
Should Alex change Galactic Survival to Celestial Survival? Nope. Celestial Survival is a Minecraft server. Stellar Survival? There’s a book called Stellar Survival Quest.
Cosmic Survival? There’s an app by that name.
Quantum Survival? Yes!
The Process …
… involves brainstorming, searching, and more brainstorming — until you develop a title that’s unique and memorable.
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To me, this is timely. I’m struggling to settle on a title for my latest book.
The story is about a working-class man who is seduced into a life of crime and comes to regret it. (Timeline 1939-1965)
After a particularly violent altercation, he decides to clean up his act but finds his past difficult to escape, especially when a Mafia boss has him on his hit list and the police are investigating him over the death of his wife.
I had a couple of working titles and had decided on Redemption but—you guessed it—there’s a plethora of books with Redemption in the title.
I may have to resort to using his name: Feargus. I used the alternative spelling as it has Fear in it.
Great idea, Thomas. Are there other names or words beginning with “fear” that would work?
Good advice. My first published novel had the working title Going Home. I never thought it was original but none of my beta readers could come up with a better suggestion. I assumed that when I sold it, the publisher would change the title. They didn’t. Not only had that title been used before, but about three other Going Homes came out around the same time. When you do a search for Going Home, my book doesn’t even come up.
Excellent point. Lack of visibility is an unfortunate consequence of title duplication. Your name is distinctive, though. A search for Sharon Marchisello brings you up in #1 position at Amazon.
Thanks for stopping by, Sharon!
Book titles are my strong suit. My books are titled as soon as they are formulated in my head. Blurbs are another story, lol. Thanks for these great tips Kathy. 🙂 x
Thanks, Debby.
I like to start with a title too, but it often changes partway through a WIP. Keep going with more titles and more books!
Something that ties in directly to the character’s personality, hobby, or occupation always resonates with me, but it can be a double-edged sword. I have SEVEN books on my Kindle with the exact same name and a search on Amazon alone returns even more. Book title really do deserve more thought. 🙂
Yeah, I see you get it, Felicia. 😉 Occupations can provide excellent ideas, but as you say, they can lead to multiple books with the same name.
Thanks for dropping by again!
Sometimes a line from the story works. Especially if it’s one you can repeat.
Yes, key phrases from a storyline often work, as long as the phrase isn’t too long.
Thanks for stopping by again, Cathy. I hope you’re keeping well.