Are You Tired of Tracking Down Alternatives for Noisy or Loud?
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Step closer, dear writer. Closer.
Shush now while I invite you into the tranquility of my studio. Take a seat by the open wind —
What’s that? A chainsaw? Perhaps a lawnmower? No, it has a high-pitched whirr. Aha! The neighbor is whipping weeds. Here. I have an extra set of earplugs for you. Put them in before you get a headache. …
Did I use noisy or loud in the previous paragraph? You already know what a chainsaw, lawnmower, and weed whipper sound like, so I’m guessing you heard the racket.
Merely incorporating loud objects in your poetry or prose can paint an effective picture. Or you can create comparisons:
His snoring, a dive bomber in my dreams, morphed into a sleepy wish for an extra pillow to smother the pilot.
The woodpecker’s insistent rat-a-tat-tatting pounded like a jackhammer in my head.
Loud and Noisy Objects Could Include:
A to C
airplane, air compressor, angry audience, avalanche, banshee, bawling infant, bomb, bragging wrestler, bulldozer, cascading waterfall, cattle stampede, chainsaw, cymbals
D to H
dentist’s drill, dive-bomber, drag race, drums, earthquake, exploding _____, fireworks, foghorn, food blender/processor, geyser, grenade, growling stomach, gunfire, hailstorm, helicopter, hurricane
I to O
ice grinder, jackhammer, lawnmower, lovesick moose, motorboat, motorcycle, megaphone, meteor impact, murder (flock) of crows, nagging spouse, off-balance washer, off-key yodeler
P to R
pack of bloodhounds, paper shredder, police siren, power washer, power sander, riot, rock concert, rock crusher, rock tumbler, rocket launch, roller coaster
S
sandblaster, screaming seagull, screaming skydiver, screeching parrot, siren, snowmobile, sporting event, sports bar, squealing brakes
T to W
thunder, tornado, train collision, train whistle, trumpeting elephant, tuba, vacuum cleaner, volcano eruption, whitewater rapids
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Choose Active Verbs Instead of Adjectives
Can you hear the sounds in the following sentences?
She stomped down the hall.
He thundered his displeasure.
The crowd roared its approval.
The train screeched to a stop.
Show the Volume
Her fierce retort pierced his eardrums.
The door slammed so hard it rattled the windows.
The wind screamed through every crevice it could find, freezing the fingers we held over our ears in an attempt to block its escalating volume.
Two cats yowled outside the house and woke the occupants from a deep sleep.
Stimulate the Sensory Palate
Noisy and loud don’t always refer to sound. The following sentences intertwine senses to provide a multi-sensory experience.
His tie with its riotous colors shrieked at me, begging to be ripped off and given a merciful death in the paper shredder.
The meadow’s wildflowers trumpeted nature’s tenacity, poking out through burnt roots and bushes within weeks of the forest fire.
Try These Loud and Noisy Adjectives
A and B
abuzz, amok, banging, baying, bellowing, berserk, blaring, blasting, bleating, blustering, blusterous, blustery, boisterous, booming, brash, braying, buzzing
C and D
cacophonous, caterwauling, chattering, clacking, clamant, clamoring, clamorous, clanging, clangorous, clanking, clattery, coarse, crashing, deafening, dinning, discordant, dissonant, drumming
E to O
ear-piercing, ear-popping, earsplitting, echoing, fierce, forte, fortissimo, grating, growling, hammering, harsh, howling, intense, jangling, jarring, loudmouthed, obstreperous, overloud
P to R
penetrating, piercing, piping, plangent, pounding, rackety, raging, rambunctious, ranting, rasping, raspy, raucous, resounding, reverberant, reverberating, ringing, riotous, rip-roaring, roaring, rolling, rowdy
S and T
screaming, sharp, shrill, stentorian, stertorous, strepitous, strident, stridulant, stridulous, squalling, tempestuous, thumping, thundering, thunderous, trumpeting
U to Y
unbridled, unrestrained, uproarious, vocal, vociferant, vociferous, voluble, wailing, wild, yelping
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Helpful post. Thanks.
Thanks, Henry. More will appear in the weeks to come.
Re. Rock concertsHaving trod the boards on many a gig, it’s interesting to distinguish between the frequencies and amplitudes produced by different speakers. Bass bins produce a muffled thumping noise that can vibrate the rib-cage. Tops or satellites produce a higher-pitched, piercing sonic wall of sound. Different combinations of guitars and amps assault the senses in different ways too – from the warm growl of a Marshall to the razor sharp tones of a Fender hot-rod. My ears have been damaged by only the highest qualities of sound!
What a great way to describe the various nuances of a rock concert. I laughed at your last sentence. You have an awesome sense of humor, Tom.
Heh heh. I used great and awesome. They’re my words for next week.
Thank you. Wonderful list.
Thanks, Tess. Next week: 150 Ways to Say “Great” or “Awesome”.