Too Many Instances of Beautiful in Your Prose or Poetry Will Dilute Its Effectiveness
The rainbow is beautiful.
Look at that beautiful woman.
This dress is beautiful.
If you resort to beautiful more than a handful of times throughout a novel, dialogue excluded, your writing will suffer.
At the bottom of this post, you’ll find more than 200 alternatives for beautiful. Don’t merely plug in substitutions. Try using the suggestions as catalysts to transform the words into verbs or nouns.
Consider This Sentence
Helen was beautiful.
Let’s pick a few words from the list and do a rewrite.
Helen’s ethereal poise tantalized every suitor who bowed the knee before her.
Better?
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The List:
A
adorable, alluring, amazing, angelic, appealing, arresting, astonishing, astounding, attractive, awe-inspiring, awesome
B
beauteous, bedazzling, beguiling, bewitching, bodacious, bonny, boundless, breathtaking
C
captivating, celestial, charming, chaste, cherubic, come-hither, comely, compelling, consummate, coquettish, cosmopolitan, curvaceous, cute
D
dazzling, delectable, delicious, delightful, desirable, disarming, divine, dreamy, dumbfounding, dynamic
E
electrifying, elegant, empyrean, enchanting, endearing, engaging, enrapturing, enthralling, enticing, entrancing, ethereal, exceptional, exciting, exotic, exquisite, extraordinary, eye-catching
F
fabulous, fair, fascinating, fetching, fiery, fine, flabbergasting, flaming, flawless, flirtatious, formidable, foxy
G and H
genteel, genuine, glamorous, glittering, glorious, glowing, good-looking, gorgeous, gracious, gripping, handsome, heady, heavenly, hot, hypnotic
I
immeasurable, impeccable, impersonal, imposing, incomparable, inconceivable, incredible, indescribable, inescapable, inexorable, infinite, inimitable, intoxicating, intriguing, inviting, irresistible
J to L
jaw-dropping, knockout, limitless, lissome, lovely, luminous, luscious, lush, lustrous
M
magical, magnetic, magnificent, majestic, matchless, measureless, mesmerizing, mind-boggling, momentous, mouth-watering, mysterious, mystical
N and O
noble, nonpareil, opulent, otherworldly, outstanding, overpowering, overwhelming
P
paralyzing, peerless, perfect, perky, personable, phenomenal, picture-perfect, picturesque, pleasing, poised, polished, potent, prepossessing, pretty, pristine, provocative, pure
R
radiant, rapturous, rare, ravishing, recherché, red-hot, refined, regal, remarkable, resplendent
S
saintly, salacious, scorching, seductive, sensational, sensuous, seraphic, serene, sexy, singular, slinky, smoking, sophisticated, sparkling, spectacular, spectral, spellbinding, spine-tingling, splendid, splendiferous, splendorous, staggering, stately, statuesque, striking, stunning, stupefying, stylish, sublime, sui generis, sultry, sunny, superior, supreme, surreal, sweet
T
taking, tantalizing, teasing, tempting, thrilling, titillating, torrid, transcendent, transcendental, transfixing
U
unbelievable, uncanny, unearthly, unequalled, unimaginable, unique, unprecedented, unrivaled, unsurpassed, untold
V and W
vivacious, voluptuous, wholesome, willowy, winning, winsome, wondrous
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My favourite word here refers to Lucy Westenra, the “Bloofer Lady” seduced by Count Dracula.
Hi, Peter. Which word?
I only had twelve of these, this time, but I still managed to cut five of them. Thanks, as always!
Kewl! It sounds like you’re busy–the best way to be, right?
A hushed silence as she entered the room.
I will use this phrase as a replacement for beautiful.
Excellent, Narendra. This shows the effect she has on others as she enters–a good alternative.
Pulchritudinous – not a very beautiful word, but it means ‘great physical beauty and appeal’.
Concupiscent – a word I’ve always liked.
Thanks, Peter. Interesting adjectives. However, will they send readers scrambling for their dictionaries? Nowadays many have problems with the simplest of words. 🙂 Used for the right pieces, though, they could lend atmosphere. I’ll add them to my master list for the book that will come out someday.
Yes Kathy. I had to resort to the dictionary when I first read them about 30years ago. I can’t remember where I read them, but I still remember the definitions.
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The word beautiful is so overused, it doesn’t mean anything anymore. It’s not in my dictionary. 🙂
Oh, you beautiful person, you. Uh … you inventive, creative, gifted writer. 😉 Beautiful doesn’t mean anything anymore, does it?
Great list! However, I felt “coquettish” and “flirtatious” did not belong here. I suppose they describe beauty in a negative sense though. On that note, maybe…
Thank-you for the comment, Ohita.
Sometimes coquettish and flirtatious would be considered negative. However, if you’re a guy, and a girl is looking at you with a coquettish expression, you might find it appealing. 😉 Words can have different connotations when viewed in context with surroundings and circumstances.
From a man’s point of view, they can all be replaced by WOW.
Ha ha! Never thought of it that way, Trevor.