Reader Gripe #11: Writers, Can You Guess What It Is?

Reader Gripe #11

It’s Never a Good Idea to Confuse Readers

This series of articles discusses hurdles that cause reader confusion.

Confusion = gripes = lost readers.

Here’s article #11. Do you see the problem? How would you fix it?

Introduction to Excerpt

This is a collage of phrasing I’ve collected from multiple books, edited to preserve anonymity of writers.

Excerpt

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